Added: Jul 3, 2008
From: BurninUpwithuBaybeh
Duration: 0:54
Setting- 7 P.M., Ellyn laying on her bed, thinking of her apology to Nick.Her phone rings.Ellyn: Hello?Nick: Yo it's Nick.Ellyn: Oh my gosh, hi! Look, let me just say that I'm really sor-Nick: Don't sweat it. You wanna come chill for a while? This girl, Fiona, who lives across the street, is comin' over, too.Ellyn: Uh..sure... Be there in a little bit...*hangs up* Something's definitely wrong here!-Ellyn gets ready, then heads to the Jonas house.She rings the doorbell, Joe answers.Ellyn: Hey J-whoa! (he yanked her inside)Joe: Get in here, NOW.Ellyn: Can you believe this? Nick has such a great heart and-Joe: OH YEAH?!Ellyn: Whoa! What's your problem?Joe: THAT! *points to the living room*There's music blasting. Nick and some girl are laughing and feeding each other whip cream from the can.Ellyn: *gets an empty feeling* Who-who's that?Joe doesn't say anything.Ellyn: *looks up at him, then back at her* No way!...Fiona?!Joe: *looks down*Nick looked over and saw Ellyn was there. He started flirting obnoxiously with Fiona.Joe: I don't believe this...*sad*Ellyn: Oh no, Joe! *she wraps her arms around him*Joe: *hugs her tight*Nick was looking back to see if they were watching. He saw them hugging and turned really sad for a second. He knew he had to step up his game.Nick: (purposely talking loud) Hey FIONA!Ellyn and Joe look over.Fiona: *laughing* Yeah?Nick makes sure Ellyn and Joe are watching, then he kisses her.Ellyn and Joe both take a shot to the heart.Joe: *grabs Ellyn's hand* Come on.Kevin comes down the stairs as Joe and Ellyn are leaving.Kevin: Where are you go-Joe slams the door.Nick looks back to see if Ellyn and Joe are watching, but he only saw Kevin.Kevin: *stares blankly at him, shakes his head in disappointment, then goes back upstairs*~Joe and EllynJoe is still holding her hand. He was walking fast and dragging her along.Ellyn: Joe- where are we going?No answer.Ellyn: Slow down I've never walked around here at night-Joe: Don't worry about it. *lets go of her hand*-For the whole walk Joe was angry, and Ellyn walked behind him in sorrow. They didn't say a word the whole time.Ellyn was looking down at his feet, thinking, while they were walking. She was trying to walk in sync with his rhythm, but then he stopped and she crashed into his back. She looked up and realized they were at a beach. They both took off their shoes and ran freely (this was their way of distressing)They laughed and started chasing each other. Then Ellyn sat down in the sand, out of breath. Joe collapsed next to her. He laid down, looking at the stars.They were silent for a little bit.Joe: Who knew you could get stabbed in the back..and have it go all the way..through your heart.Ellyn: I know what you mean... I wore my cute outfit for him!Joe: *observes it* And apparently got it dirty for me.Ellyn: *looks down at her sandy clothes* Apparently. *smiles*Joe pulled her down so she was laying, too. They were facing each other.Ellyn: *laughs, then quickly pecks him*Joe: *smiles and pulls her back*At that moment, they didn't think about cute outfits or Nick and Fiona. All they did was focus on each other, and started kissing.No freaking way! Lol haha sorry I had to. Anyways, this is my last for the week/weekend. Please comment me telling me what you think? Thanks a bunch! =] HAPPY FOURTH TOMORROW!
Channel: Entertainment
Tags: brothers burnin' chapter drama eight hotties jb jobromance jobros joe jonas jonasbrothersmusic kevin love nick story up
Rating: 5.00 (3 ratings) Views: 190' favoriteCount='2 Comments: 17
MrsAriJonas Says:
Jul 3, 2008 - omg im like always the first to comment!!! i luv it!! i wish you cood put up more!!! ur stories are awesome!! wen you are a great author i wood be proud to say that i knew you(kinda!!! lol pleez put up more!!! happy fourth evry one!!
j0eejonassx7 Says:
Jul 3, 2008 - cuteeeeeee!i love it!i cant believe nick would do that!
jobroslvr4evr Says:
Jul 3, 2008 - LOVED it!! veryy twisted : ) haha
JBJTaylor Says:
Jul 3, 2008 - wha?!
addictedfan13 Says:
Jul 3, 2008 - omg! i loved it!! can't wait 4 the next one!! so much drama lol
xoxoaussiebeexoxo Says:
Jul 3, 2008 - Great!! =D Keep it up
BellaClara99 Says:
Jul 3, 2008 - awesome
sk8ter676 Says:
Jul 3, 2008 - you write one good storying cant wait to see the next one posted!!!!
ilovenickjj1 Says:
Jul 3, 2008 - omg u r the best writer post more PLEASEEE
jennilyn66 Says:
Jul 4, 2008 - OH NO...i need more...please!! AND btw...how old r they??
breakingfree2008 Says:
Jul 4, 2008 - oh please please post another one! :D you rock and i really want to see another chapter before i go out of town tonight!
kiwitwistwlemon Says:
Jul 4, 2008 - i have been waiting on yours and i want to say happy 4th 2 my mom is cooking now
CrystleCutie Says:
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zashleyfantildeath Says:
Jul 4, 2008 - *Dies*Ghost: Thanks a lot! You made her wait to long and she died!Crap...SHE NEVER WROTE HER WILL =P lolLove it!
lizzzz101 Says:
Jul 5, 2008 - more more more!im ur biggest fan ever!
AngieCourt202 Says:
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JBJTaylor Says:
Jul 3, 2008 - AHH OMG Love it!!! 5.5